Very well-written. I look forward to chapter 2
Blood just gushing out the motherfucker, and here I am with an electrical cord trying to tie off the damn artery. You ever be laying by the side of the road covered in another man's blood talking to the cops and your girlfriend breaks up with you? I have.
FUNK brs
@FUNKbrs
Age 43, Male
Misery Merchant
Memphis
Joined on 10/28/00
- Level:
- 13
- Exp Points:
- 1,840 / 1,880
- Exp Rank:
- 35,236
- Vote Power:
- 5.55 votes
- Rank:
- Safety Patrol
- Global Rank:
- 29,620
- Blams:
- 203
- Saves:
- 126
- B/P Bonus:
- 6%
- Whistle:
- Normal
- Trophies:
- 1
- Medals:
- 2,066
- Supporter:
- 9y 9d
Comments
Just finished typing it today. Have you read book 1 yet? It's every bit as good, although I'm getting better at this whole "novelist" thing with practice. However, I HIGHLY suggest you dropping me your email address so I can give you the semifinal version, as opposed to the rough ass drafts I post on NG.
DrSevenSeizeMD
Youre so awesome.
FUNKbrs
If you keep stroking my ego, it's going to shoot all over my keyboard.