Not bad for a first effort...
A little gamy though. But that is still pretty appropriate. The last note goes on for a little long, though.
It's pretty cool to see the improvement from this early submission.
Not bad for a first effort...
A little gamy though. But that is still pretty appropriate. The last note goes on for a little long, though.
It's pretty cool to see the improvement from this early submission.
Yes, your right. It is pretty gamy. The ending does drag on for quite a while, but the effect i was trying to create for the whole peice is intact.
I have really improved from this peice, i now have a clearer understanding of the effects i try to emmit from my music. I am working, hard.
Thank you for your review. I am very pleased you rate my work an 8.
Thank you again. :)
nice long builds
Good slow rising action in this piece. A little patience always pays off when if comes to climbing action.
Yeah, sorry. The beginning does drag on a bit. But i think it builds a suspence pretty well. The crescendo does work well also. Thank you for the review, im glad you liked it. I am really happy with the overall rating that you have given. Many thanks.
Nice effort
I really like the changes in this one. Are you using a program, a keyboard, or a hybrid?
Good.
The beat was a little "drivey", but the breakdowm was great. I'm assuming you're using keyboard for bass and drums, and a real guitar? Damn good work though.
Thanks a lot man.
very 8-bit.....
very slow, kind of casio-y. Is this layered? There's definitly some good runs here.
Four years later, he wrote:
Yeah, not meant to sound like an NES track, but this was done using Finale 2002b's MIDI sequencer. I'm working with 2007 now and the playback is much more authentic. Look for some bigger (and better) projects soon.
needs accompaniment....
Just guitar... no layering at all....
You have MIDI and a keyboard, right? It's pretty easy to layer MIDI with key board drums. However, I could *do* something with this, given the proper encouragement and a longer sample.
I do wish the quality was better, but it's supposed to be sparse. I personally don't want to clutter something up just to give it a 'beat'. Thanks for the comments, see you in four more years!
good shit, man..
This is quite a bit like the Down Shock stuff, only downshock has much more guitars and is a little less techno. Also, there is a serious anti-machine age nihilistic thing going on in the lyrics in downshock.
anti-machine in a machine based world. Got to love it. Thanks for the response.
oh, how it grabs the ASS!
This is EXACTLY what I want! bass, snare and synth, and god intended tcchno to be. Just add one more layer of treble, man, preferably voice.
nice runs....
Good synth work here, man. As always, I exhort you to plumb the depths of your sound with extra layers. I'm getting the feeling you only use two tracks?
Blood just gushing out the motherfucker, and here I am with an electrical cord trying to tie off the damn artery. You ever be laying by the side of the road covered in another man's blood talking to the cops and your girlfriend breaks up with you? I have.
Age 43, Male
Misery Merchant
Memphis
Joined on 10/28/00