FUNKbrs's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Marathon Man]

MMMmm.... Low end YUMMY.....

This still needs a backbone, though. A straight pulse bass is your friend, and stutter snare rolls add new depth to your builds.

[3RD Degree Vision]

not enough layers....

Your missing a LOT of low end here.... Remember, traditional drum sounds are traditions because they work. Badass rhythms, but don't forget your roots, man.

[The Baron Wastelands [spooky!]]

ooh, a nice long one

build is a little slow... footsteps of an alien creature in the distance... quiet, a little TOO quiet.... now alien voices are heard along with footsteps......

argh, I had to turn my speakers up all the way, but this IS quite pictruresque.

[Temporal Vortex]

nice trip track!!!

Man, that is some trip shit. Add a couple of spontaneous lighting strikes with this loop (a kicked reverb coil works nicely), and you've got something that'll make a judge trip his shit.

[Exploration]

very creepy

Makes me think of an invesion of giant insects.... a little bright, but very good.

[My Life [edit]]

nice use of distortion

but the track is a little right heavey. More a background track to a fusion song. Very good though.

[Zero Tolerance]

thanks. alittle wrath, just what I ordered.

However, the straight pulse is your friend. I know its a cliché, but it WORKS.

[Human Format]

You like those round drums, don't you?

I just feel you need to add another layer. You're trips are excellent, but I NEED that BOOM BOOM BOOM!

[Cosmos]

Nice head bobber.

I just think it could do with a little more traditonal sounds in it. Lay this on a house beat and I think you've really got something. Add a couple of stutter builds, and were talking masterpiece. This is a nice light tripper, but it needs a little more wrath.

[Critical Point (Demo)]

Damn, if only it wasnt sped up....

Have you thought about going to one of the "help" forums on NG? I'm certain someone could tell you whats going on.