a little electronic to be in "jazz"
As a guy who plays jazz, this is missing a few key elements. First, you need a swinging ride. Second, you need a nice "knock" sound. You got the bass, but you also need some horn synth to really fill out the genre.
MMMmm.... Low end YUMMY.....
This still needs a backbone, though. A straight pulse bass is your friend, and stutter snare rolls add new depth to your builds.
not enough layers....
Your missing a LOT of low end here.... Remember, traditional drum sounds are traditions because they work. Badass rhythms, but don't forget your roots, man.
ooh, a nice long one
build is a little slow... footsteps of an alien creature in the distance... quiet, a little TOO quiet.... now alien voices are heard along with footsteps......
argh, I had to turn my speakers up all the way, but this IS quite pictruresque.
nice trip track!!!
Man, that is some trip shit. Add a couple of spontaneous lighting strikes with this loop (a kicked reverb coil works nicely), and you've got something that'll make a judge trip his shit.
very creepy
Makes me think of an invesion of giant insects.... a little bright, but very good.
nice use of distortion
but the track is a little right heavey. More a background track to a fusion song. Very good though.
thanks. alittle wrath, just what I ordered.
However, the straight pulse is your friend. I know its a cliché, but it WORKS.
You like those round drums, don't you?
I just feel you need to add another layer. You're trips are excellent, but I NEED that BOOM BOOM BOOM!
Nice head bobber.
I just think it could do with a little more traditonal sounds in it. Lay this on a house beat and I think you've really got something. Add a couple of stutter builds, and were talking masterpiece. This is a nice light tripper, but it needs a little more wrath.
Blood just gushing out the motherfucker, and here I am with an electrical cord trying to tie off the damn artery. You ever be laying by the side of the road covered in another man's blood talking to the cops and your girlfriend breaks up with you? I have.
Age 43, Male
Misery Merchant
Memphis
Joined on 10/28/00
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